I consider myself to be a professional reader that can sometimes be a bit snarky. I'm a tattoo'd, yoga pants wearing, mom of 2 boys.
I couldn't make it past 5 chapters in this book. It's awful. It's written in a narrative with the occasional dialogue which annoys me AND the dialogue is SO juvenile. The heroine is a 29 yo virgin (yup, so believable) & the 'hero' propositions her the moment he meets her.
Here's an example: "My name is still Ellis, Jess and thank you...thank you again for telling me your secret. You're so brave."
Yes she's so brave for telling you that.
I don't think a 36 yo alpha 'tycoon' billionaire would talk like that. There was also a lot of British slang which I didn't know what any of it meant. That didn't really bother me though. I just couldn't take how it was written anymore.